Simply Poetry

Open Space


across the ocean

bird’s eye view

colourful parachute

towed by speedboat

light breeze

an adventurous challenge.


Crystal clear sea

myriads of fish

wide open beach

sandy stretches

swaying palms

waves breaking

against rocks.


Sun setting

brilliant orange

distant mountains

in the horizon

vast space

captivating experience

evoking senses

giving a new dimension

to life.


Comments on: "Open Space" (11)

  1. Parasailing looks exciting but I haven’t tried it. Probably a bit too exciting for me. πŸ™‚


  2. The picture is painted in my mind ❀


    • The view is breathtaking from the open space! Marine life and most beautiful corals. Glad your imagination took you there! Appreciate your lovely comment, Michelle. ❀ Love, Iris.

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  3. What an expansive and exhilarating poem you have created today, Iris. It has captured the ‘wind in your hair’ feeling so well.

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    • The feeling up in this vast expanse is certainly exhilarating! Catching the wind, sea, land … is beyond words … I do appreciate your fresh and vivid comment. πŸ™‚ Thank you, Mary. πŸ™‚ Love, Iris.


  4. Wow! Amazingly written… I could actually picture the beauty. Lovely imagery Iris. πŸ™‚


  5. You have conquered a whole descriptive frame over here, dear Iris… I also liked the multiple perspective you have taken here, as a sort of symbolic, “poetic overview”.
    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry…
    Best wishes and happy weekend ahead to you, Aquileana πŸ˜›


    • So very glad to read about how you’ve felt about the poem from your perspective. Such a wonderful insight! I am truly grateful and do value your comment, Aquileana. πŸ™‚ Thank you so much for the feedback. Have lovely weekend. Love, Iris.

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