Simply Poetry

Open Space

Parasailing

across the ocean

bird’s eye view

colourful parachute

towed by speedboat

light breeze

an adventurous challenge.

~

Crystal clear sea

myriads of fish

wide open beach

sandy stretches

swaying palms

waves breaking

against rocks.

~

Sun setting

brilliant orange

distant mountains

in the horizon

vast space

captivating experience

evoking senses

giving a new dimension

to life.

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Comments on: "Open Space" (11)

  1. Parasailing looks exciting but I haven’t tried it. Probably a bit too exciting for me. 🙂

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  2. The picture is painted in my mind ❤

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    • The view is breathtaking from the open space! Marine life and most beautiful corals. Glad your imagination took you there! Appreciate your lovely comment, Michelle. ❤ Love, Iris.

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  3. What an expansive and exhilarating poem you have created today, Iris. It has captured the ‘wind in your hair’ feeling so well.

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    • The feeling up in this vast expanse is certainly exhilarating! Catching the wind, sea, land … is beyond words … I do appreciate your fresh and vivid comment. 🙂 Thank you, Mary. 🙂 Love, Iris.

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  4. Wow! Amazingly written… I could actually picture the beauty. Lovely imagery Iris. 🙂

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  5. You have conquered a whole descriptive frame over here, dear Iris… I also liked the multiple perspective you have taken here, as a sort of symbolic, “poetic overview”.
    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry…
    Best wishes and happy weekend ahead to you, Aquileana 😛

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    • So very glad to read about how you’ve felt about the poem from your perspective. Such a wonderful insight! I am truly grateful and do value your comment, Aquileana. 🙂 Thank you so much for the feedback. Have lovely weekend. Love, Iris.

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