Parasailing
across the ocean
bird’s eye view
colourful parachute
towed by speedboat
light breeze
an adventurous challenge.
~
Crystal clear sea
myriads of fish
wide open beach
sandy stretches
swaying palms
waves breaking
against rocks.
~
Sun setting
brilliant orange
distant mountains
in the horizon
vast space
captivating experience
evoking senses
giving a new dimension
to life.
Iris@poetsmith 
Comments on: "Open Space" (11)
Parasailing looks exciting but I haven’t tried it. Probably a bit too exciting for me. 🙂
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Exciting it is! It takes you to greater heights … 😉 🙂 Thank you for your interest Gallivanta. 🙂 Love, Iris.
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The picture is painted in my mind ❤
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The view is breathtaking from the open space! Marine life and most beautiful corals. Glad your imagination took you there! Appreciate your lovely comment, Michelle. ❤ Love, Iris.
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What an expansive and exhilarating poem you have created today, Iris. It has captured the ‘wind in your hair’ feeling so well.
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The feeling up in this vast expanse is certainly exhilarating! Catching the wind, sea, land … is beyond words … I do appreciate your fresh and vivid comment. 🙂 Thank you, Mary. 🙂 Love, Iris.
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Wow! Amazingly written… I could actually picture the beauty. Lovely imagery Iris. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words. 🙂
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🙂 you’re welcome… Keep up the great work.
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You have conquered a whole descriptive frame over here, dear Iris… I also liked the multiple perspective you have taken here, as a sort of symbolic, “poetic overview”.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry…
Best wishes and happy weekend ahead to you, Aquileana 😛
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So very glad to read about how you’ve felt about the poem from your perspective. Such a wonderful insight! I am truly grateful and do value your comment, Aquileana. 🙂 Thank you so much for the feedback. Have lovely weekend. Love, Iris.
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