Simply Poetry

Birds At Dusk

Birds flying in formation

at evening time

dark clouds gathering

thunder rumbling

a rainbow arches across the sky.

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  1. Did you recognise the birds? I didn’t go to this event but today was the official farewell for the Godwits.

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  2. Very nice Tanka! Lovely imagery.

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  3. I can nearly see those birds of your poem… those black shades moving in the right direction!


  4. Hi Iris, thanks for always sharing your beautiful poetry with us ❀ I nominated you for a poetry challenge in my newest post, if you want to take part πŸ™‚


    • Thanks, Christy, you are most kind. I am just happy to share my poetry here but do appreciate your thoughts on the poetry challenge πŸ™‚ ❀


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