Simply Poetry

Awake Dawn

The ocean chorus sings

Sound of lapping waves

Scent of the sea

How sweet the air

Breathe all that is

Surely as the sun will rise


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  1. I love sunrises in the beach and in a few words you captured the emotion! πŸ™‚

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  2. Beautiful, Iris…thank you for bringing the ocean to me today! πŸ˜€β€οΈ

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  3. Lovely, Iris. This makes me yearn for summer. πŸ™‚

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  4. I feel refreshed! Beautifully expressed poem πŸ™‚

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  5. Can a poem be like honey? Lovely dear Iris …

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  6. As usual so beautiful! I used to follow you as “awomansaved” before I became really ill and left WordPress for awhile. So glad I was led to your site again!

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  7. The sounds of a beach are my favorite.

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  8. Beautiful imagery Iris!

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  9. You put into wonderful words how I feel when I am at the beach. Thank you!

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  10. The ocean at dawn, a perfect poem!!!

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  11. This poem resonates so deep with me Iris – the sound and smell of the ocean is something to be treasured and how often did I wish I could bottle it somehow everytime I spent my holidays on a beach. πŸ˜„ πŸ’–πŸŽΆπŸ³

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  12. How beautifully soothing. Loved it!

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