The ocean chorus sings
Sound of lapping waves
Scent of the sea
How sweet the air
Breathe all that is
Surely as the sun will rise
The ocean chorus sings
Sound of lapping waves
Scent of the sea
How sweet the air
Breathe all that is
Surely as the sun will rise
Comments on: "Awake Dawn" (29)
I love sunrises in the beach and in a few words you captured the emotion! 🙂
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Thank you so much. So glad this poem resonated with you! 🙂
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Beautiful, Iris…thank you for bringing the ocean to me today! 😀❤️
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Happy to have you here with me… watching the sunrise, Annika. ♥️ Thanks very much for your lovely company! 😃
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Lovely, Iris. This makes me yearn for summer. 🙂
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Appreciate your lovely reflection, thank you, Diana. Delighted to have you join in… enjoy the tranquility and beauty of this seascape! 😃 ♥️
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I feel refreshed! Beautifully expressed poem 🙂
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Really delighted to read your inspiring words, thank you so much! 😃
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Such a sweet piece! 🙂
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Thank you! So glad you like the poem. 🙂
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Can a poem be like honey? Lovely dear Iris …
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Truly Julie, your words are as sweet as honey… simply poetry… so lovely!! 😉 😃 G’day, have a good weekend! ☀️ 🌄
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Big smiles back at you!
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As usual so beautiful! I used to follow you as “awomansaved” before I became really ill and left WordPress for awhile. So glad I was led to your site again!
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Hi Deborah, thanks for stopping by. I am so glad to see you here! 😃 Welcome back to my site and hope to see more of you! ♥️
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The sounds of a beach are my favorite.
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That is lovely… so glad you joined in at the beach! Appreciate your comment, thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful imagery Iris!
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Many thanks, Radhika. Delighted to have you visit! 🙂
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You put into wonderful words how I feel when I am at the beach. Thank you!
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Thank you so much… such a lovely reflection, Cecilia. 🙂 Appreciate your visit and kind words!
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The ocean at dawn, a perfect poem!!!
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Such a delightful comment! Thank you for your kind words… 🙂
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This poem resonates so deep with me Iris – the sound and smell of the ocean is something to be treasured and how often did I wish I could bottle it somehow everytime I spent my holidays on a beach. 😄 💖🎶🐳
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Thank you, Sarah… your words describe so splendidly the atmosphere and essence of the poem. ❤ Glad to have here… such a pleasure to share… just enjoy! 😃 ⛱ 🎶
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How beautifully soothing. Loved it!
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Appreciate your lovely words. Thank you so much! 😀
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My pleasure.
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