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Enchanting Lagoon

Jewel of dreamy lagoon

Pristine golden sands

to water’s edge

As the setting sun

disappears out of sight

A glowing red sunset

opens up a spectacular

vista over the horizon

Endless spectrum of colours

The dreamy lagoon


Magical strings

echoing serenades

Melodies to the rhythm

of gentle waves

under canopy of stars

The enchanting lagoon

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  1. ilovepoetry2 said:

    Beautifully tranquil … just dreaming. Charming poem. Love it!

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  2. You really do paint an enchanting picture πŸ™‚

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  3. A lovely poem, Iris, about a place that sounds truly magical.

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  4. Beautiful! You are great at describing nature. It is as if I were staring at a painting or watching and perceiving everything alive: the lagoon, the red sunset and all the colors. Loved this poem!

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  5. Love this dreamy, enchanting lagoon, Iris! Your words make me imagine how it would be to be there and enjoy the magic of this moment! Divine! πŸ˜„πŸ’•πŸ¨πŸŒΊ

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    • Wow Sarah, may that dreamy, magical moment last for a long time to come… dream, dream dream!! 😍 Always happy to have your company, welcome to this exotic isle of lagoons. 🏞 πŸ˜ƒ ❀ 🎡

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  6. This is truly beautiful and enchanting, Iris. I would love to have a brief stay in such a magical seascape

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  7. Enchanting and dreamy .. my sort of place! Lovely dear Iris …

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  8. Sounds so peaceful. πŸ™‚

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  9. You’ve got me dreaming of your enchanting lagoon….

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  10. I can just picture this, and it is fantastic

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  11. Your enchanting lagoon sounds like paradise, Iris. I’m sure there are no crocodiles lurking there. 😍

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    • Ah, crocs are mysterious… but no way here. πŸ˜‰ This magical place is tranquil and dreamy… So you are in paradise, Rose. Welcome to enchanting lagoon! πŸŽ† πŸ˜ƒ


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