Simply Poetry

Enchanting Lagoon

July 31, 2018

Jewel of dreamy lagoon

Pristine golden sands

to water’s edge

As the setting sun

disappears out of sight

A glowing red sunset

opens up a spectacular

vista over the horizon

Endless spectrum of colours

The dreamy lagoon

~

Magical strings

echoing serenades

Melodies to the rhythm

of gentle waves

under canopy of stars

The enchanting lagoon

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  1. ilovepoetry2 said:
    July 31, 2018 at 10:54 pm

    Beautifully tranquil … just dreaming. Charming poem. Love it!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. scifihammy said:
    August 1, 2018 at 6:28 am

    You really do paint an enchanting picture 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  3. D. Wallace Peach said:
    August 1, 2018 at 4:03 pm

    A lovely poem, Iris, about a place that sounds truly magical.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. MOMENTS said:
    August 2, 2018 at 10:47 am

    Beautiful! You are great at describing nature. It is as if I were staring at a painting or watching and perceiving everything alive: the lagoon, the red sunset and all the colors. Loved this poem!

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Sarah said:
    August 3, 2018 at 5:20 pm

    Love this dreamy, enchanting lagoon, Iris! Your words make me imagine how it would be to be there and enjoy the magic of this moment! Divine! 😄💕🐨🌺

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      August 3, 2018 at 6:26 pm

      Wow Sarah, may that dreamy, magical moment last for a long time to come… dream, dream dream!! 😍 Always happy to have your company, welcome to this exotic isle of lagoons. 🏞 😃 ❤ 🎵

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  6. L. T. Garvin, Author said:
    August 3, 2018 at 7:26 pm

    This is truly beautiful and enchanting, Iris. I would love to have a brief stay in such a magical seascape

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Julie@frogpondfarm said:
    August 4, 2018 at 8:14 pm

    Enchanting and dreamy .. my sort of place! Lovely dear Iris …

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Gallivanta said:
    August 6, 2018 at 11:06 am

    Sounds so peaceful. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Bespoke Traveler said:
    August 6, 2018 at 6:13 pm

    You’ve got me dreaming of your enchanting lagoon….

    Liked by 1 person

  10. stbarbebaker said:
    August 31, 2018 at 2:44 am

    I can just picture this, and it is fantastic

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Poet Rummager said:
    September 11, 2018 at 7:00 pm

    Your enchanting lagoon sounds like paradise, Iris. I’m sure there are no crocodiles lurking there. 😍

    Liked by 1 person

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