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Somewhere A Soft Wind

September 2, 2018

Splendour in spring

The flowers

dance and sing

~

Somewhere a hill

covered in green and gold

~

Soft winds warm

this moment

of pure delight

~

Girl on a bicycle

riding slowly

to the Apple Rose bakery

~

I walk fast hopefully

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  1. MOMENTS said:
    September 2, 2018 at 7:21 pm

    Beautiful poem with great images of delight and hope.

    Liked by 3 people

  2. incarceratedshadows said:
    September 2, 2018 at 8:17 pm

    Wonderful Iris. Simply wonderful.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Gallivanta said:
    September 3, 2018 at 10:16 am

    The wind sounds so comforting, and I wouldn’t mind being the girl going to the Apple Rose bakery. There’s bound to be a tasty treat there.

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  4. scifihammy said:
    September 3, 2018 at 11:31 am

    Mmm Your soft wind blows on a beautiful spring. 🙂

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  5. Poet Rummager said:
    September 3, 2018 at 1:20 pm

    Lol. The girl on the bike’s destination is one which I envy! Melodic and lovely, Iris. 🎶🎵🤗

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  6. Cynthia Reyes said:
    September 3, 2018 at 9:39 pm

    Sucha fresh feel to this poem.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. debsdialogue said:
    September 4, 2018 at 4:09 am

    Your words and imagery made me hungry! Autumn winds begin to blow here. What a contrast to spring,

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  8. GILDASPOEMS said:
    September 4, 2018 at 1:47 pm

    A poem about simple joys with a wimsical feel. Really love the last line!

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  9. Carol A. Hand said:
    September 5, 2018 at 4:09 pm

    You have painted such lovely images, Iris. ❤

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  10. Sarah said:
    September 6, 2018 at 9:06 am

    A hill covered in green and gold – I can clearly see that hill in my mind, Iris! Spring must be afoot now in your part of the world, right? Wish you a glorious one! Much love! 😄💕🌷

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  11. D. Wallace Peach said:
    September 7, 2018 at 5:49 pm

    What a pretty scene you paint. I’d like to be walking there too. 🙂

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  12. Jet Eliot said:
    September 7, 2018 at 7:27 pm

    Oh, how this poetry moved me, Iris. Always great to be alive. Thank you for your words and peace and joy today.

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      September 7, 2018 at 8:03 pm

      Such a wonderful and beautiful interpretation, Jet. It is really gratifying to know that you have experienced the peace and joy in this poem. I do appreciate your lovely reflection and kind words. Much love and hugs.

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  13. L. T. Garvin, Author said:
    September 8, 2018 at 2:26 am

    I love the image of the girl on the bike enjoying the glory of spring. There is such beauty and comfort in nature, and you remind us so well in your splendid poems! Very nice, Iris.

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      September 8, 2018 at 12:13 pm

      Yes, Spring is just perfect for that, Lana. And her hair caught the soft winds and light… Thanks very much for your beautiful reflection and words which I really appreciate. Delighted to have you visit over here! 😃 🌾 🌈 🌹

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  14. Julie@frogpondfarm said:
    September 8, 2018 at 8:06 pm

    Lovely Iris … I wonder what treats she will find at the bakery 🙂

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      September 8, 2018 at 8:41 pm

      Hmm, yes I wonder? Well, there so many varieties to choose from I suppose, Julie… difficult isn’t it? Nothing like the freshly baked muffins, or croissants… hmm, she will have to invite us right, to join her for brekkie! Good morning, enjoy your, your treat, Julie… thanks for your company! 😃 😉

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  16. Annika Perry said:
    September 11, 2018 at 7:37 am

    Beautiful poem, Iris, that leaves us dancing, singing,walking fast! Full of detail that paints a vivid image, I can sense the soft warm wind, see the flowers and join on heading to the wonderfully named Apple Rose bakery! Exquisite!

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      September 11, 2018 at 3:46 pm

      Hi Annika, great to have you visit! Thanks so much for the inspiring words… appreciate your lovely reflection. I am delighted you enjoyed this and a pleasure to have your company at the Apple Rose bakery for tea!! 😃 🍰 ☕

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  17. Nancy Walker said:
    September 16, 2018 at 12:39 am

    Lovely joyful Spring poem. I can picture the girl on the bicycle riding to the Apple Rose (what a beautiful name) Bakery. ❤ I missed you, Iris!

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      September 16, 2018 at 5:18 pm

      Hi Nancy, welcome back! So happy to have you visit… and delighted you enjoyed this poem. Missed you too, but I do understand your situation, Nancy. ❤ Anyhow so good to see you writing and online again. Keep well… love and prayers ⚘ 🌻

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  18. stbarbebaker said:
    September 18, 2018 at 2:57 am

    Yes! I can just picture it

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  20. Nancy said:
    October 9, 2018 at 2:56 am

    I can feel the soft winds blowing through my hair as I ride my bicycle to Apple Rose bakery to grab a treat. Beautiful imagery. Serene and cheery. ❤

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