Simply Poetry

Then There Was

April 27, 2019

The full moon

Brightness reflects the water

And the music that plays

The music that plays

Warms the heart

 

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  1. scifihammy said:
    April 28, 2019 at 11:21 am

    You set the scene and capture the magical moment in a few short lines. Excellent. 🙂

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  2. Quirky Girl said:
    April 28, 2019 at 10:02 pm

    Your poetic words magically transform into a dance as the music plays and plays. 😊

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  3. allysoally said:
    April 29, 2019 at 1:00 pm

    I love your poetry, Iris….I missed you!

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      April 29, 2019 at 2:42 pm

      Hi Ally, appreciate your visit and kind words. I know I haven’t been posting so often… but glad to share when I can. Yes, although work at this time takes priority, one must also enjoy other interests, and make time for them. Delighted to hear from you and wishing you well, Ally. Much love.

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  4. Julie@frogpondfarm said:
    May 3, 2019 at 8:02 pm

    Hey Iris … so lovely to hear from you .. delightful poem 🙂

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  5. Temy Hoang said:
    May 4, 2019 at 4:21 am

    A gorgeous poem as always, Iris! 🙂

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      May 4, 2019 at 10:51 am

      Hi Temy, delighted to have you visit and thanks for the kind words. Lovely to see you online again… I know I have not been writing so frequently as much as I would like to. Wishing you well and happy writing! 😀

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      • Temy Hoang said:
        May 5, 2019 at 2:49 am

        My pleasure, Iris. I’m glad you started writing again. Hope all is well with you. As for me, I’ve been writing book reviews on Instagram, but I found it not as creative as writing poems 😀 I’ll continue doing it for now though.

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        • Iris@poetsmith said:
          May 5, 2019 at 8:52 am

          Yes, it’s nice to have a change in one’s creativity… all the best Temy in your book reviews. I am fine thanks, but in this new working environment I’m busier than ever! Anyway, am learning to prioritise and hope to have more time for writing… Have a wonderful week ahead! ☀️ 🌷

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        • Temy Hoang said:
          May 5, 2019 at 2:37 pm

          I see… Thanks, Iris. You take care, and all the best with your work and your writing!

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  6. D. Wallace Peach said:
    May 6, 2019 at 5:28 am

    Beautiful, Iris. I love the repeat in this. 😀

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  7. GILDASPOEMS said:
    May 6, 2019 at 3:28 pm

    Your poem sets a mystical, fun & playful scene. Thanks for sharing!

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  8. Bespoke Traveler said:
    May 6, 2019 at 9:35 pm

    Love the strong rhythm in this short piece. I can almost hear that music too.

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  9. Wendy L. Macdonald said:
    July 16, 2019 at 1:45 pm

    Lovely, dear Iris. Creation’s symphonies are the best.
    Blessings ~ Wendy Mac

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