Simply Poetry

Until Daybreak

The wind blows

through the trees

Silver specks above


A red sky melts

over the horizon

Silence takes hold


Relentless water churns

splashing waves over

an empty shore


Miles of sand

Warm faces lit

around the campfire

Comments on: "Until Daybreak" (20)

  1. Your description is so good I feel like I’m there. πŸ™‚

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  2. ElizaDL said:

    Thank you, Iris. You certainly know the art of weaving words into beautiful pictures! This poem is simply great. πŸ™‚

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  3. Beautiful, dear Iris! Cher xo

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  4. It a poem and a landscape, a beautiful poetry-scape, also a great escape which is probably what we would all like to do about now. Wonderful poetry, Iris. Much love, xo.

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    • Delighted to hear from you, Lana. πŸ’ž You’re right we need to continue to be motivated and creative, and to carry on those conversations… telling stories, playing music and singing. It’s also lovely by the campfire on a starry night! Join in my friend! Thank you for your lovely company…. ✨ 🎢 πŸ˜€


  5. Wonderful, dear Iris

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  6. Your poem had my mind wandering through the pictures it presented. Thanks for posting it.

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