Simply Poetry

Music Within The Words

October 17, 2017

The music of life

it seems to me

a paradise where

roses bloom

beside a garden wall

when stars are bright

the nightingale sings

a melody of

love’s refrain

a song at twilight

a symphony of hues

the magic of poetry!

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  1. englepip said:
    October 17, 2017 at 10:08 pm

    Lovely images.

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  3. balroop2013 said:
    October 18, 2017 at 2:41 am

    Beautifully articulated! Iris, I have heard this melodious music and seen its magic that transports us into another land…far away from the humdrum of life… 🙂

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      October 18, 2017 at 10:46 am

      Splendid expression and interpretation, Balroop. Appreciate your beautiful reflection… thank you very much. ❤ Poetry replenishes the heart and soul and I believe it gives us the freedom to understand and see things in a different light… 🌹 😃 Have a lovely day! 🎶 🕊 🌻

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  4. scifihammy said:
    October 18, 2017 at 9:53 am

    A lovely poetic song with a lilt to it. 🙂

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  5. Welcome to Wales said:
    October 18, 2017 at 12:42 pm

    Fabulous. I love it.

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  6. D. Wallace Peach said:
    October 18, 2017 at 4:12 pm

    Wonderful, Iris. Poetry by nature is music, and you tap into that well with ease.

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  7. Gallivanta said:
    October 19, 2017 at 10:14 am

    A symphony of hues is a lovely line; my favourite. It was like that here this evening.

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  8. L. T. Garvin, Author said:
    October 19, 2017 at 1:58 pm

    Nature makes beautiful, musical poetry. Very lovely, Iris!

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      October 19, 2017 at 4:18 pm

      So true Lana, nature has so much creativity to inspire us when we take time to appreciate and enjoy… it’s really amazing! I do appreciate your lovely reflection and thanks for taking time to share your thoughts ❤… Have a pleasant day! 🎶 🌷 😃

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  9. allysoally said:
    October 20, 2017 at 7:31 am

    I came back to read this, Iris. It lifted my spirits! 🙂

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  10. Julie@frogpondfarm said:
    October 21, 2017 at 7:31 pm

    The music of life, nature’s colours and blooms. Magic Iris, beautiful

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  11. Quirky Girl said:
    October 23, 2017 at 9:27 pm

    Nature does lend itself beautifully to creating beautiful poetry! 😉

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      October 24, 2017 at 1:47 am

      Ah, it surely does! 😉 There’s so much beauty and life in nature to appreciate… music that is inspirational… the amazing wonders of Creation all within our reach to enjoy and be thankful for. Thank you for your beautiful reflection… and for your visit! 😃 🎶 🐦 🌹

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  12. Poet Rummager said:
    October 24, 2017 at 8:32 am

    There’s music in nature if we stop and listen. Thanks for the lovely reminder! 🙂

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  13. Miss Gentileschi said:
    October 25, 2017 at 1:13 pm

    Your words captured the beauty of the music of life so wonderfully, Iris – every verse and syllable is a sheer delight to read! 🙂 💕🎼🌹

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    • Iris@poetsmith said:
      October 25, 2017 at 5:14 pm

      Hi Sarah, it’s such a pleasure to share this poem and I really appreciate your beautiful reflection… thank you! 🌄 🌹 🎶 So glad that you enjoyed it and it’s such a delight to have your thoughts on this. Have a lovely Autumn and enjoy the colours of the season! 🍃 🍁 Much love and hugs 😃 🐨

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  14. almeidadepaulo said:
    October 30, 2017 at 12:52 am

    So lovely the music of life Iris!!!

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  15. Charlotte Hoather said:
    October 30, 2017 at 4:13 pm

    I could hear the music in this as I read it Iris, just lovely.

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  16. Cynthia Reyes said:
    November 3, 2017 at 8:46 am

    Yes indeed! A beautiful poem, Iris.

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  17. Imelda said:
    November 15, 2017 at 2:58 am

    Lovely! This evokes peace and joy to me. 💙

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  18. Michaelungchu said:
    December 31, 2017 at 5:58 pm

    Woooow… Beautiful lines!

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